- Title: Undecided
- Artist: leavyn
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Description:
Obviously her neck is over-exaggerated.
Anyway, I'm still probably going to add more shading to her hair.
Though, for whatever reason, her face still looks very flat.
If you give me a rating below a 3 then please comment and give me a bit of critic on what you think I should improve on.
Enjoy. c: - Date: 02/19/2009
- Tags: undecided
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lelouchy - 02/20/2009
- i think this is amazing, but the closed eye does need a bit of work on! but the opened eye! OMG! it's amazing!
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- leavyn - 02/19/2009
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@ Henry:
You didn't specify what you're talking about at all, so I'm not sure what you're getting at. D: - Report As Spam
- Henry Horrible - 02/19/2009
- yeah, its too far to the left and too thin. It would look a lot better w/out the top half circle. Other than that it isn't too bad
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- Abendroth Blutjager - 02/19/2009
- Her closed eyelid looks really odd, as if it's disfigured....
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