- by angelbunny1391 |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 02/13/2009 |
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- Title: 4 xMayaruHimex
- Artist: angelbunny1391
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Description:
took a few days :D
i liked how it came out, even though i dont really know how to use sai yet >.<
my deviantart page
www.angelbunny1391.deviantart.com
- Date: 02/13/2009
- Tags: xmayaruhimex
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Joselyne Elizabeth - 03/06/2010
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good
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- Klaora - 07/19/2009
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Though I would like to say that the hand is done quite well. The one on the chest is a little off, but I am not going to critique what I cannot do well myself. For one, it is misleading, and another, I find it insulting to you. razz
I find that the legs are also a bit off. The upper part is too long and the lower too short. They are roughly the same length and she should be able to sit on her feet.
Other than that, I don't see anything that can be improved upon. Great work! - Report As Spam
- Klaora - 07/19/2009
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I am a little annoyed by the "mistakes" people have pointed out about this. There is nothing wrong with those areas, simply the style of art. (eyes, lip, etc.)
I really like how you've colored this, especially to help give the ruffles at the dress more character.
There are two things that bother me with anatomy, the first of which is that the arm on her chest is in a very unnatural pose. (Do it yourself, it's not very comfortable. XD) (Character limit, more to come!) - Report As Spam
- AmayaKisyukai - 05/06/2009
- its vary good but you should work on your eye tracking so that they look like there both looking in the same direction, im not trying to be mean thou... just helpfull
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- pinky_naya08 - 05/06/2009
- its so cute!! your really good at drawing!! smile
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- XxXmiss-me-onlyXxX - 02/20/2009
- its cute how do u color like that
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- punchinpeaches - 02/15/2009
- i love it! its so CUTE!! ^^
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