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  • by Moxxeh |
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  • Title: Merman and Seawitch
  • Artist: Moxxeh
  • Description: This is the first thing I have ever submitted in the art arena. I'm not looking for 5/5, just looking for opinions on how I can make this better and so on. So please no "You suck!! lol lol lol gtfo" , seriously, don't be retarded.
    Thank you for commenting, giving out some drawing hints, or just voting in general! have a good day ;D
  • Date: 11/25/2008
  • Tags: merman seawitch
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Midnight Star_Lightt - 12/19/2008
  • the man's face is a bit weird, I like the girl's though...color in all one direction next time, and make the seaweed and rock darker, they detract from the picture, also the girl's tail isn't colored as well as the boy's tail....but still really nice drawing XD I can't draw merppl at all, and i think the poses r pretty good 2, so 4/5
  • StitchParadox - 12/19/2008
  • You suck!! lol lol lol gtfo jking Nice work Love the way you color suggest for your coloring a blending pencil makes blending a little better and your faces are a little flat but other that that great work
  • Namyw_Draco - 12/19/2008
  • i love it, but for constructive critisism, the hair on the blue one should be more floaty, there is no gravity under water.
  • The Huntress Artemis - 11/27/2008
  • absolutely beautiful! i can't draw at all as beautiful as this. who cares about scribbles? i can hardly see them, only if you look really close can you see them. amazing!
  • RAWR It is I - 11/27/2008
  • Wow, color pencil? Impressive biggrin
    Well I have to say I love the coloring, if only for the background. For example, the seaweed in the back and the blue background is a bit messy, you can see the scribbles razz
    Also it would be great if you couldn't see the pencil outline in some places. Just critisizing, but it's still amazing :3
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