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  • Title: Once Upon a December...
  • Artist: iCheesy
  • Description: Of pianofreek133. Pen, colored in CS2. Flower brushes from aethereality.net. I tried to duplicate the delicateness of a music box within this piece, like in the song, Once Upon a December. {EDIT}: OK, I've been getting quite a few ratings on this, but I haven't really gotten any constructive criticism, or any comments at all. It would really help if you could please post why you gave me your rating, if you do not mind. I won't flame you. (:
  • Date: 08/24/2008
  • Tags: pianofreek133 piano music notes musical
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • -Fancy R - 02/09/2011
  • Love the background. The Sparkles are a very nice touch.
    The anatomy is a bit off the top. Perhaps, Lower the facial expression a bit? Other than that, Its a great piece of work. :3
  • Aryain Flames - 05/29/2009
  • I like it. The head may be a bit out of proportion, but it doesn't detract from the piece, and the color scheme is fantabulous. I give it a 5/5 !
  • flutter307 - 11/05/2008
  • Eyes are usually set around the middle of the face so I think you need to make his hair/head bigger and make room for more of a forehead.
    And maybe his jaw sticks out too much... but i cant tell because he is looking up.

    But's thats just me. 4/5

  • Lemon_Kitty - 09/13/2008
  • I really like the colors and the shimmery effect, but I agree that his head looks disproportionate. Specifically, his face is a little too large, and the back of his head is a little too small. Other than that, very nice clean lines, and good colors!
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