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  • pg 3 of you are my sin
  • Title: pg 3 of you are my sin
  • Artist: n near rivers
  • Description: yeah next page will have less narration... please comment. oh and please note that by school she attends university
  • Date: 06/23/2009
  • Tags: demon comic
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • I The Author I - 12/24/2009
  • I think your screentones are too large. You should try adjusting their size and making them smaller. That would help alot!

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  • Shiro-Jin - 09/19/2009
  • You should try to use some different patterned screentones, the speckle one makes it all blend together a bit too much. I was confused as to what picture what what at first. o.o
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