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  • Raiko tame Sonchi page 2
  • Title: Raiko tame Sonchi page 2
  • Artist: Makoonz
  • Description: i know that Acker looks like crap... and yes, this is a wip.
  • Date: 05/20/2009
  • Tags: raiko tame sonchi page2
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Comments (5 Comments)
  • wraightsky - 07/04/2009
  • Hey... not bad. If I can make a few suggestions... the first thing that throws me off is the flow of the page. It's not really clear where the eye is supposed to go, or what order the text goes in. To make this page flow a little better, you could move the panel where the person says "only one demon would be able..." up and to the right. Also, it's really unclear and a little confusing when the panel that says "hello, demetri-kun" is supposed to be read. Good luck and good job!
  • n near rivers - 06/23/2009
  • i find it really funny when people use kun, chan, sama un-necissarly in there comics but i find it funnier win they give out there long and full name and put the adress as well
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