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  • Arenas
  • Page 20 of Platinum VS Steel
  • Title: Page 20 of Platinum VS Steel
  • Artist: CuteyHoneyChan
  • Description: Just got back from work, I'm so glad everyone likes the comic! ^_^
  • Date: 02/01/2009
  • Tags: page platinum steel
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • filigree hummingbird - 12/29/2009
  • whoa the comment under me is a little scary O.o but i guess she does have a point. the action is good but the porportions are not if you need a some quick tips message ok? biggrin
  • Angel Nicholson - 09/15/2009
  • HOLY ******** KID! DO YOU NOT LEARN!???!?!?!
    Your anatomy is s**t. It sucks. Work on it!
    I tried being nice but ******** work is pretty ******** shitty and I'm not sayying that just to piss you off.
    It really is and if you have hopes of getting anywhere with this piece of s**t you're going to be sadly dissapointed. The storyline is fine, I give that a 4/5!
    But your drawing skills can kiss my a**.
  • I The Author I - 07/31/2009
  • Anatomy. Plot. Proportions. Those are the three essential parts in manga making that you are terrible at. Please work on them..
  • II Tea-Usagi II - 07/26/2009
  • da woman's nose when she is facing <== that way it looks like she has a beak rather than a nose o.o try working harder
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