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- | Submitted on 01/22/2009 |
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- Title: P.V.S. Page 2
- Artist: CuteyHoneyChan
- Description: Page two of Platinum V.S. Steel
- Date: 01/22/2009
- Tags: page manga platinum steel
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ace of Spencers - 07/08/2010
- hahaha that is cute but funny
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- Blackbutler-crew - 10/08/2009
- good and cute but work on your shading and dont use too much points on the nose k we want sometha looks nice not somethinbg that will kill ya
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- sakura123222 - 09/30/2009
- u gotta improve your side face view and hair.......... 3/5
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- nouvelle_vaugelove - 09/11/2009
- cute comic i like it...
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- Rin Nagoyaka - 08/11/2009
- you need to work on anotomy a bit...yeah...the nose IS a bit weird...oh, i already commented o this in july? wow, well the hand still bothers me.
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- I The Author I - 07/29/2009
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List of problems and such;
Head is backwards in the bottom two panels.
Fingers of Melanie in the bottom left panel is terribly distorted.
Head of the storekeeper in the upper left panel is also terribly distorted; head sticks out too far as well as the nose. - Report As Spam
- Rin Nagoyaka - 07/10/2009
- her hand on the bottom right panel is bothering me...ALOT.
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