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I have found my soul
everyone has a soul location, its almost always good to find it. unfortunately, i found mine, why is unfortunate, heres where i found it:

There is a city, with no moon,
Where my soul walks, all alone,
Lights are on, but noone is there,
I found my soul, why does it give me that scare?
The city is big, quite large in fact,
To wander forever, my poor soul's hardly in tact.


uhh, so, it kind of sucks, and, i didnt spen any time on it, but, theres a poem thingy, to help give you an idea. (also, on the second line, im sure theres some kind of accent that will make it ryme, so, use your imagination XP)

so, think of it like this:


Theres a huge city, and, its all dark, theres no moon, no stars, the only lights come from the city, and, my sould is a small child, all alone, there is noone else, scared and hopeless, i cant help but to feel sorry for myself, and i hate it when i feel sorry for myself. of course, as a psycological expert, i'd say my soul is there because of trauma caused as a kid, with divorce, and death, and all that kinda stuff, and its still going on. it sucks.



a lot of times i wonder, if ill ever make it through.






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Ziporae
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 26, 2006 @ 10:24pm
Wow that poem was really good. o.o I liked the description of the city and the emptiness inside of it. I think I might understand how you feel in a weird way. It was cool to read.. Moving and very well written. Nice job! It kind of makes me sad that this is how it is for you, because you out of all people don't deserve it. I'm sorry. Oh, yeah.. Jab, if I can make it through I know you can ^^


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