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book: 1, chapter: 4, page: 1
what Jab beheld, as he passed through the hospital doors, was quite interesting, for, noone had ever celebrated him like this before. every sooschy, from kreikfon, and beyond, were lined up to see there hero's "ahem" and heroines, jeez kaya, way to get mad at the narator. as the walked, and rolled, across an amazingly made velvety smooth carpet, they came to the end, where the king and queen of kreikfon greeted them, and thanked them. they each got a cool medal. then, they partyed, as mechanic sooschys repaired their ship. when the ship was done, and it was getting late, they decided, it was time to go, so, they gather up their things, found stephen laying on the ground, passed out from Ooringana rootbeer, they were going to head home, or, wherever they usually go when their done with a mission. "wait up" said Zip, as she ran up to the gang while they were getting in the ship. "i want to come".
"ehh, sure why not, but, as soon as we get to a galactic police station, im getting a restraining order" said Jab
"too bad you dont have one now" said Zip, as she gave him a friendly thank you hug. "thanks, all of you for savin me"
"whatever, get in the cargo hold, thats where youll be staying, the bunks are for everyone whos name does not have a zip in it" said Jab
"you suck, im takin your bunk" said zip, not really caring of what Jab just said.
"well, time to party somewhere else" said stephen as he woke up
and as they lifted off, and flew away, there were many sooschys, thousands actually, waving goodbye to them.
"hey Jab, what was that thing that flew us to saftey?" asked Zip
"that, was jabb, only to be used as an emergency, u saw i was out for a week, takes a lot of energy, dangerously enough, i can die from using him" answerd Jab
"wow, scary"
"so, where we goin to party at?" asked kenze
"guys, were gonna have to hold of on the partying for a bit" said KATE
"why?" whined stephen
"because, we have some newly eargent business to attend to"....






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Ziporae
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 25, 2006 @ 07:54am
I luff it! (Again) Oh yeah and the ending was actually pretty satisfying, but I must ask.. Are you making another one?! That would be very cool. It's funny how right after I give you that friendly hug I tell you "you suck" lol, although, you know I'd never say that in RL.. 4laugh Its cool how you have some superhuman form that emerges when one is put in such an emergency situation. It's actually a little similar to real life if I think about it now. Hey, this entry answered all the questions from my last one. Man, that guy Stephen really ahs to lay off the partying some.. Rofl.. xd


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 25, 2006 @ 07:58am
well, i based the charactors off real lide people, stephens an awesome skater.

and, of couse im making a second one, thats why its "book: 1" book two will start soon



jabnin
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