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random things written into a journal
forgotten
forgotten:

the cool breeze passes through my hair,
the slience, is all i hear.
alone in this forgotten place,
no ones around no one to face.

abandon neglected, im all alone,
nothing to arm, to fight for my own.
i feel empty, like a bottomless pit,
giving me no hope, i feel sick.

my body is falling to thousands of pieces,
u being gone is tearing me into pieces.
i cry each night, because ur gone,
these feelings i have, it feels so wrong.

my body is left for the scavengers in the ground,
but my spirit is still stalking around.
walking alone on the empty streets,
i go out on a search to find the lost me.






User Comments: [10]
fallin_dream15
Community Member





Tue Sep 09, 2008 @ 02:57am


another amazing piece of work mrgreen nice job!


gabbel
Community Member





Tue Sep 09, 2008 @ 03:31am


yeah sure


fallin_dream15
Community Member





Tue Sep 09, 2008 @ 04:06am


lol?
the tone is sad but u put it together nicely


gabbel
Community Member





Tue Sep 09, 2008 @ 04:13am


ok. thanks


Debbster13
Community Member





Tue Sep 09, 2008 @ 09:59pm


Well i like it!!! blaugh


gabbel
Community Member





Tue Sep 09, 2008 @ 11:16pm


thank you!!!!!!!
makes me happy! ^.^


iDrugsRus
Community Member





Wed Sep 10, 2008 @ 12:06am


That... was... beautiful!!! How did you come up with all those rhymes??!! They're amazing! Now, you know I wouldn't lie to you, when I say these are absitively, posolutely, fan-bob-tastical. *takes a deep breath* Whoa, lots of words! biggrin


gabbel
Community Member





Wed Sep 10, 2008 @ 12:08am


thank you!
u totally rock
lolz
and fan-bob-stical?
lolz
love that word!
lol mrgreen


xGrEEnJeLLie
Community Member





Thu Sep 11, 2008 @ 02:59am


that poem reminds me of sombody....


gabbel
Community Member





Thu Sep 11, 2008 @ 10:31pm


im sorry
i didnt mean to make it seem like it was about that someone! sad


User Comments: [10]
 
 
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