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Dawn of a New World
Well this the my story Dawn of a New World mostly consist of alchemics and the search for Hiro, a ancient sword alchemic. Reid and Cruze are getting trained so they are prepared!
Dawn of a New World
*HUFF* *HUFF* "Dammit, the task Kai gave me is a little tougher than I thought, even using my alchemic powers is still not enough to get passed his dog Giet." Reid sat down and started to think of a plan of how to really use his alchemic powers to good use. "Maybe I can transmutate a replica copy of myself that would have the same since of smell so it can buy me some time?"

"Reid are you done, your training and this isn't the right time for you to be resting; now get up on your feet and complete the assignment." Reid got up slowing and started to build up his alchemic mist. "Hmm.. whats this?"

"Alright here goes!" Reid slams his hand into a wall transmutating it into himself without flaws. The sense of smell was exacly the same and he told the Replica Reid to runner out there like you had something for him. Kai knew what Reid was doing, its the same thing that Kai did when he was younger to get passed his masters dog.

Reid sped down the hallway passed the replica Reid and Giet. "Alright put water in Giet's bowl and assignment complete." Kai started to clap slowly but he was proud that he got passed Giet by transmutating something that looked like him with the same exact scent.

"Reid your lucky I didn't teach Giet that trick, you did the same thing when I was young b/c half of the things I'm teaching you are from my master."

"WHAT!" Reid fell to the floor but sprang back up. "I thought you made this up! But at least it telling me how to use my alchemic powers to better use.

"Well that was good for your 12th try with the water attempt." Reid gave Kai a evil look. "Well look at the time, you can stay here in the mansion tonight and we will continue our training tomorrow morning got it Reid!"

"Yes Kai sir!"

"Don't call me sir, it makes me feel o-old -_-" Kai walked up his stair to his bed room sweatdrop .

Reid laughed, "Alright Kai, see you in the morning. I wonder how Cruze is doing with his training with his grandfather? How do you think he is doing Giet?"

Giet yawned and started to drift asleep. "Right, right I guess I should be hitting the sack as well."
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"Y-you know for an old man, you s-sure have some quick hands!" Cruze took a few breathes then charged in again to grab the medicine.

"Whoops your way too slow Cruze to catch me, how about using your wolf senses to tell where I'm going to move my hand this time?"

"So that's what it is? I never actually understood this power to begin with and now I understand." Cruze heightened his senses, his grandfathers hand was going to be a trick so it was going to stay in the same place. "Alright I got it this time!" Cruze grabbed the medicine with one hand.
"My-my you actually got it. Congradulations Cruze!" Cruze's grandfather hugged him.

"O-okay no hugging! mad " Cruze slugged him into the next room.

Cruze's grandfather laughed, " You are just like your father, no more hugging after a certain age huh. rofl "

"Yeah my points excatly but I have to get this medicine to mom now so I'll be back here in a few minutes or tomorrow to continue our training alright gramps!"

"You certainly have a lot of nicknames for me don't you, hmm lets see? Oldman, Gramps, oldly, old n Cranky, old wolf, ancient, ancestor..there are more but thats how far as my memory goes?"

"That's why I call you ancient, you remember half of those name and I only call you two now! Well Gramps or Old man, I'll be right back!"

"Aren't you gone yet! stressed " Cruze's grandfather stared at him vigerously.

Cruze growled. "Fine! See you tomorrow ancient one! stressed "

"Well at least you still come to see me from time to time Cruze. xd " Cruze's grandfather put a smile on his face.





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    garrett challies
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    Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 05:25am


    nice story i rlly suck at mackin up storys but ur rlly rlly good, so al i ha 2 say now is.. ******** AWSOEM!!! xd xp


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