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a book of poems
ok i may have started this cuz my friend also has a poem book. so dats where is idea came from, but not da poem, it was all me, im so proud lol.

LOVE NEVER STOPS

there was a time when all was good
when we were together and
nothing could change that

when you told me you loved me
and held me tight
in your arms

when i could have stared into your eyes
and felt loved, safe, and have my worries
and fears melt away

but that fateful day
when all that changed in a heat beat
and u left me forever

for your death turned my heart
into a cold black stone
of nothingness

for when i stop to grieve your death of a bullet
i get left behind and forgotten
cause the world never stops for anyone

as i lay down and cry
i relize that most people wish
that they could have died insted of their lover

but to me living with no heart and no one
is much worse than
death itself

so when you died bleeding in my arms
i knew that i took the worst
just for you

the only thing that keeps me going
through these long and lonely days
is the thought that our love never stops

just cause you are gone
and i am still here
with a stone for a heart

i know my tears
of pain and sorrow will never bring you
back into my arms

i know that some day you will be
and we will never be sparated again
as long as the sun shines and the wind howls

but that someday is now
for i cant live any longer
without you with me

as i place the bullet into the gun
i think thoughts only
of you with me once again

as i put the gun
to my head
i say here i come back to you

BOOM
body laying lifeless
on the floor

and two people meeting each other
never to be separted again
for love never stops

tell me wat ya think pls.






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Xx Black Dove xX
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 26, 2008 @ 10:09am
i know im not da best writer, but id give myself at least a C lol


commentCommented on: Fri Feb 29, 2008 @ 06:50pm
please some1 read my poems and tell me wat ya think, pls.



Xx Black Dove xX
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