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new song how is it so? how could it be? why do we dream? can it really be so? anyone can answer no matter what they think so get up on ur feet move away from ur seat and dance away the day or do something to move u something like walk. no matter what u do now no no matter what it is.just wrote it out of boredom. yea. anyone want to give their opinion on it? or post something?

Posted by: hshaver13 Thu Jul 21, 2005 @ 07:47pm

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Commented on: Fri Jul 22, 2005 @ 01:42pm


	i was kinda thinkin like right after you say "move away from your seat and dance away the day" well the "dance away the day" part...my own particular opinion should be like "and dance to the beat"...just a suggestion...

Commented on: Fri Jul 22, 2005 @ 11:19pm


	i like the sugestion. but it wouldnt sound the same. it would sound a little cleaner though.

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