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I just write to help calm my self down, so I'll write when I'm mad,sad or even bored. What ever comes out is out I write, so later I can laugh at my problems.

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Feels Like Death ((Um hey y'all if you guys want to coment go right ahead ok... this is just a poem i wrote for my boy friend heart heart oh and ps can you guys rate it? please thanks 1-10 10 being great! )) I close my eyes My heart stops I can't breath I try to speak I open my mouth Not even a peep. I feel him The love of my life I feel him wartm And open my eyes My heart races I breath rapidly The room spins Then... Darkness No I am not dead I sit up Open my eyes I see him smile His warm voice Whispers into my ears "I Love You." I know What happened It was not death But life, Love...

Posted by: lil_wicca4eva Sun Jun 26, 2005 @ 01:30am

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puka mix 69
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Commented on: Sun Jun 26, 2005 @ 01:38am


	It's really very nice, a few things i can suggest though, that some of your words you might wanna choose differently, just to help it flow more, but besides that it's really good

Commented on: Sun Jun 26, 2005 @ 01:47am


	well its supossed to be that way thank you for the critisim ^^ i appriciate it ((holly s**t i can't spell))

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star son caelum
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Commented on: Mon Jul 18, 2005 @ 04:48pm


	whoot, good

Commented on: Wed Mar 15, 2006 @ 06:22pm


	u spelt warmth wrong but besides that from what i saw ts awsome

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