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Okay, don't get me wrong... I love the story I'm reading, it's really funny. But honestly, people, know your lingo before you write fanfiction. And just... Don't be this stupid, period. I give you... The stupidest mistake EVER.

"Eh, Gaara. What are you doing here?"

The Hokage of Wind shrugged, "You were running?"

.........HOKAGE OF WIND???????? What the heck is THAT? The kage of wind, or the Kazekage. The leaf leader of wind makes NO SENSE!! Come ON, people! Sheesh... *glares* *returns to reading stupidhead person's fic, which I love, even though* Gr. Out!
~sakura





SakuraMinamino
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  • [03/05/07 08:41pm]
  • [03/03/07 05:53am]
  • [03/01/07 01:58am]

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    bardock75
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    commentCommented on: Sat Mar 03, 2007 @ 07:09pm
    I've noticed something about your writing style. This may surprise you if you don't already know it. Your's is a style similar to stream-of-consciousness style of writing. You just type whatever springs into your head, right when it does. Very stream-of-consciousness. If you don't know what this means, you'll learn about it at some point this semester in English.


    commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 03:04am
    Haha, yeah, I do that when I'm just typing stuff. Because I feel like that what I'm writing to people should be exactly what I'm thinking, not some edited version. The way I write when I'm writing stories is VERY different, lol. If you'll give me your email, I'll send you either an original story I'm working on or a HP fanfic- depending on how much you know about Harry Potter and whether you like Snape, lol. Because if you don't like him, you won't like the fic. But yeah... I probably should try to write a stream of consciousness story, but somehow it doesn't seem to work as well when I'm not writing about me. Go figure. : )



    SakuraMinamino
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    commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 03:07am
    O.o I just looked to see if you'd replied to my comment on your journal... And the novel has dissapeared! (lol) Strange... ^_^ Hopefully just a glitch? But why would Gaia do that? Hm........... : ) And you never answered me about the skye acct. Happy Spring Break!!! : )


    commentCommented on: Sun Mar 04, 2007 @ 08:46pm
    Um, I deleted the ones that weren't directly related to the fanfic. I usually prefer to carry on long conversations through the use of PM's, away from the public eye. And, I'm not sure that I want a skye acct. It seems to me like I'm still not a good enough author to be able to show something to people I might never meet.



    bardock75
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    SakuraMinamino
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    commentCommented on: Mon Mar 05, 2007 @ 08:32pm
    OOOOH!! Okay, sorry. Yo comprendo, ahora. : )


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