<center>I used to know your simple smile From somewhere long ago I always could tell your style In anything you'd do One day you'll stay with me Or so I so dearly hope In everything it's you I see In dreams, in wish, in time...
I wake without you In this closed dark world I know I should be here But you're gone so I just don't know
You elusive memory you be You taunt me painfully If only you in truth I could see Would you still be there? Can dreams become true and real? My life would have such meaning I'd give you my dark fate to seal In dreams, in wish, in time...
I saw you in my dream last night You knew my name and I yours We were together for just once But I will remember till I find you .Again. ~
This dream is but a dream And life eternal knows this But in it's forever wisdom It makes us believe it's not So when a dreamer dreams They dream of a dreamer Dreaming of life eternal ~</center>
You know, the last stanza had summeriazed my experience Junior summer. Everything felt like a dream, or waking up from a very long one...I really like the last stanza, but that's probably because I can relate to it.
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Viirage · Community Member · Tue Feb 15, 2005 @ 03:38am
Don't we all at some point in our lives?
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· Community Member · Wed Feb 16, 2005 @ 05:17am
I like this one too. It's got a nice melancholic feel to it. Like painful yearning. 3nodding
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Happy0 · Community Member · Wed Feb 16, 2005 @ 06:10am
Yes...I am talking about chocolate crying (( xd ))
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· Community Member · Thu Feb 17, 2005 @ 12:59am
You're talking about CHOCOLATE in this poem? I never would of guessed!!!
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For some reason, now whenever I think of the word 'chocolate'...the word 'orgasm' comes up...
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Viirage · Community Member · Thu Feb 17, 2005 @ 03:59am
*strangles*NO! That was a joke, Woman! A JOKE!!!!screamgonkstresseddomokun
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· Community Member · Thu Feb 17, 2005 @ 11:46pm
*strangled* G-GAH! X_X Knowing you though, you NEVER know!! *wegs.*
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Viirage · Community Member · Fri Feb 18, 2005 @ 12:55am
You know how much I joke! I would have at least thought that you wouldn't know when to take me serious!!! gonk
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· Community Member · Fri Feb 18, 2005 @ 05:26am
I had LOADS of chocolate...And I'm thinking of Raziel and I locked in a Coffin together. heartheartdomokun
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Viirage · Community Member · Tue Feb 22, 2005 @ 10:28pm