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my dark little evil journal!!!!
just a poem that i did wen i was really upset
it's not as long as it looks lol

the pain sinks in
th reality comes
the want of death is wat u become
u find a sharp object
more then likely a knife
u cut..... wrists
u die tonight
so now ur found
all bloody and dead
this is the night
that suicide came to ur head
u let the pain bother u solved all ur problems
when suicide came to mind
u have seen it befor
u kno where to cut
the blood pours out
for wat seems like forever
the pain is so bad
u want it to stop
an hour or more
it feels like forever
but u deal with pain
u let ur self bleed
until ur dead
this has now become
ur perminent way to solve
all ur problems
so u look down to earth
from heaven abouve
they miss u so much
u think ..........
why did i let it take me?
why did i want to die?
but it only took 1 night
when suicide came to ur mind






User Comments: [2]
crimeismything
Community Member





Fri Dec 29, 2006 @ 07:19pm


Your poem is very good, and like you said i can see that it was written out of hurt. Just dont let everything hit you so bad, cause if you do, i guess you will be gone as fast as you can imagine. Try to live life without so much negativity, it might seem hard in the begining but i've started and its not so hard. You might get lead back to were you were when you were writing this poem, but don't be afraid, as soon as you can fight it back once, you'll be able to get out easier and faster.


Black-Cat-Revenants
Community Member





Fri Oct 17, 2008 @ 11:32am


A very good poem. more dark-ish then the last one.


User Comments: [2]
 
 
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