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I'm an artistic person... Kinda... And I wish you guys would see what I am like and what kind of artist I am... Thank you... And please if you visit my journal leave a comment at the entries... Thank you again...
Some silly poetry I made up... Don't laugh... I'm not a poetic person...
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Feel the cold breeze
Blowing through the naked trees
Look at the sun
It's not around
Look at the flowers
They're underground
That's what I can't live without
That's what winter's all about.

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If love was a sentence
How long would it be?
If love was a Third eye
What could it see?
If love was a story?
How long would it last?
If love was a wound
Was it made in the past?
If you know what love is
Then good luck and God bless
If love is not pleasant for you
Then it's not pleasant for the person who loves you.






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punk_rouge
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 18, 2006 @ 04:00pm
great poem ayumi i love it better than the silly crap i made


commentCommented on: Thu Oct 19, 2006 @ 11:56am
It's not that good... I'm just a silly amature...



Ayumi Botosai
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Karma Hyuga-Uchiha
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 27, 2006 @ 07:39pm
your not an amatuer i am my poems are so lame yours are so much better but i can write stories


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