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so many things are wrong, nothing is right... what I need is to open up again, what is it that I'm so afraid of exposing...
Happy End
Happy End

Surounded by this candle light
Alone in the dark of night
I lie here, naked, on my own
False smile from this happy child
My soul is Frozen.
Old pictures of memories,
once Forgoten in my sleep.
In this suicidal ring of demise.
Empty thoughts inside myself.
When once outside was safe.
The red rivers flow.
Droplets drowning my fears.
Breaking the habbits long ago.
Falling from the tree.
Only to touch halfway.
Church bells ringing.
The end has come.






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Look Behind Her
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 18, 2004 @ 07:48pm
I love u soo much and your other poems r wonderful


commentCommented on: Sat Dec 18, 2004 @ 11:16pm
whoa...that was...wow eek



Myuka
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 04, 2005 @ 05:39pm
Thats really, really good. Nice work. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 04, 2005 @ 05:43pm
i like the poem....do you write often...or do you have more?



onlyateardropaway
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Kattie
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 06, 2005 @ 03:06am
A nice one,would make a pretty good song,I suppose 3nodding


commentCommented on: Mon May 23, 2005 @ 09:04am
I love it! It totaly just like my life.. heart



kaguna
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commentCommented on: Tue Jun 07, 2005 @ 02:34am
<center>Your poems are wonderful. I am jealous. heart


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