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This journal is gonna basicly be for my story called Fangs. Check it out.
Fangs: Chapter two: The Search/Part two
As Fayt continued on into the huge city he caught a wiff of somthing familiar and the smell of the girl was also very close to it. He decided that the crowded city streets were too hard to search from so he went into a deserted alley and he jumped to the side of a wall. He bounced from that wall to the one on the other side. he kept doing that over and over until he reached the top of a building. He looked down at the people from there and he then pointed his head in the direction of the two scents. He spoke words to himself in his mind as he figured out who the other scent came from.
"Its her.....too....? How is she here aswell?" He started to run and he jumped to the roofs of other buildings to get closer to the familiar scent. The smell he was tracking led him slightly outside of the city. When he got to the last building at the end of the city he saw the girl once more but she was walking with another girl. This other girl had purple colored skin, violet colored eyes, hers ears had black at their tips, a tail, and shoulder length white hair. When Fayt saw her he almost gasped but he kept quiet. In his mind he said "Dar...."
"Seeya tommarow Darcy!" said the cat girl that Fayt was currently tracking.
"Later Kagali! Seeya at school." said Darcy, waving to Kagali. Darcy's ears perked up as she looked to the anthro with silver fur that stood on a building with the corner of her eye. In her mind she thought "Fayt...? What is he doing here!? He might ruin everything...." She turned and walk down another street, carrying her bookbag. Fayt's eyes shifted to the cat girl, Kagali. He spoke to himself "So thats her name....Kagali....what a beautiful name...." he jumped from the building and he landed on the street, about 20 feet away from Kagali. Kagali turned around quickly to where Fayt was standing but as soon as she looked, he was gone. She rose an eyebrow and said to herself, "That was strange.....I thought someone was there....." As she turned once more, she saw a tall, muscular anthro male with silver fur and yellow-gold eyes. She couldn't help but slowly look up and down due to the fact that he was naked.
"Y-your...naked!" she said almost gasping while she blushed.
"What?" Fayt said right before an arrow with a black diamond blade plunged through his chest, missing his internal organs. "GAHH!!" yelled Fayt as it pierced through his body. He fell to his knees and his eyes shut as he seemed to pass out.
Kagali yelled "Oh my God!! Are you alright!!?" She quickly got down on her knees and put her hands on his shoulders and shaked him slightly. Fayt's head hung down and his silver hair droops down.
"What am I going to do!!? I have to help him!" She struggles, trying to pick him up but she was able to do so after three tries. She put his arm over her shoulder and started to walk to her house. When she got to her house she opened the door and brought him inside. She laid him down up the carpet and she pulled the arrow from his chest. She looked away when she pulled out the arrow and then she noticed that the arrow was covered in shiny silver colored blood. She got some towels and she put them under him to soak up the bleeding. The wound started to heal itself automaticly. When she noticed the self-healing she wondered how that was happening.
"How can he be doing that!?" she said under her breath. Her eyes wandered across his body continually and her face became bright red.
"What am I gonna do!? This is the first boy I've ever had here before! What if this guy is a psycho and he wakes up and kills me!?" She said to herself out loud but when she looked to his face she changed her mind
"No....his face....he seems so at peace....he can't be a killer.....its a good thing that my parents on out of town for a while." She said to herself in a lower tone. She wanted to touch his fur but she was a little scared. She started to put her hand over his chest and he opened his eyes. She jumped back and gasped when he did. She moved away slighlty as Fayt sat up and looked to her, then at his surroundings. He wondered how he got to where he was and he figured that the anthro girl could tell him.






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Balmung224
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 14, 2004 @ 01:31am
hmmmm its okay...some errors like if it missed his internal organs it would have had to have gone through his sternum and that would break it being that it was black diamond tipped...the sternum would have collapsed inward peircing his lungs suffocating him...some spelling and gmatical errors too...i give it hmmmmm 7/10 3nodding


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 14, 2004 @ 01:49am
uhh....thanks Balmung....
P.S. He isn't exactly....a normal anthro so thats why he's still alive. He self-healed.



Tatseshi
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