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The Chemistry Between Him

Posted by: Rainbowed-Toast Mon Apr 10, 2006 @ 11:31pm

Dayum. D;

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Shakira8528
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Commented on: Mon Apr 10, 2006 @ 11:39pm


	Aww Hehe biggrin

Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 12:10am


	MORE! hehe

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Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 12:17am


	Hi! I'm commenting!

Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 12:40am


	i want more it's wonderful i like it

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Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 12:50am


	lmao nice xD more i wanna red more =3 rofl

Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 01:27am


	hey this is very interesting lol...continue the story!!!!

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Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 02:47am


	dude come on with the next part!!!it's so awesome.this is so cool!!

Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 06:16pm


	Oh wow this is really good! Are you doing more? well, then One small comment about the format of the story is a bit un organized. And its hard for me to read. You don't have to take this advice but, when you do dialogue do this: Rinoa: "Whatever she says here" Squall: "Whatever he says here" Well, you don't have to follow it. Please don't get mad. This story is really good I like it!But, how did you find me? Well, you must know that I am a final fantasy fan right? By my profile? ^_^ Well, thanks for telling me about the story! Rinoa and Squall are like a really cute couple just like Irvine and Selphie. razz bwahh thats my opinion. lols. -Tammy

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Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 06:25pm


	well ty and i love taking advice so dont be shy for giving advice

Commented on: Tue Apr 11, 2006 @ 06:40pm


	awww! i love it! MORE!!! xd

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Commented on: Wed Apr 12, 2006 @ 02:31pm


	wow u should make like a book this is good!

Commented on: Thu Apr 13, 2006 @ 06:27am


	awsome story

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Commented on: Thu Apr 13, 2006 @ 08:02pm


	I really like it,but it was a bit hard to read.Have you considered posting it on Fictionpress?Or Quizilla?

Commented on: Tue May 02, 2006 @ 02:07pm


	plan creepii stare

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