Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

My Poems and Other Things...~
Trapped

Trapped inside my own home. Who would’ve thought it would ever come to this? I pull my trembling, skeletal fingers through my dry hair. My hazel gaze turns towards the covered window. No amount of money in the world would tempt me to look outside.
I don’t want to see the charred earth and dark red rivers. All the horrors of war in the history of the world have gathered around my humble home in only a few nights. A piercing whistling sound fills the air. Quickly I drop to my stomach and cling to the floor, the soft carpet rubbing gently against my face.
The whistling becomes silent, then is immediately followed by a pop; an explosion. I also hear sounds no one should ever have to hear, even though I’m shielding my ears as best I can. The homes down the street from me are burning; I can hear the crackling of flaming wood and the moans of my half-dead neighbors.
There is nothing I can do. If I even pull the curtain aside to view the gory scene, I will be shot to death. Oh woe is me. At least my neighbors have escaped this bloody hell… My thoughts are interrupted as the house trembles violently. I bite my tongue to keep from crying out. If those barbaric soldiers even hear me breathe, they will, of course, kill me.
As I lay still on the floor, my imagination takes me into heaven. Paper flowers, blue clouds, and a broad purple sky. Daisies dance in the wind, and little faeries sprinkle their glittery goodness upon small children. Sweet cupcakes with rainbow candies on top… A little girl- me, perhaps? - giggles and eagerly awaits her turn to open a wrapped gift.
Small pudgy hands grasp a box and tug on the ribbon. The silky ribbon falls to the ground after much struggling. The shiny wrapping paper is torn into pieces. The hands reach for the top of the box…the top comes off…and my world explodes into blood, fire, and darkness.






User Comments: [13] [add]
kikan123456
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:00pm
Oh woe is me. haha.

But to the point...I like it. Makes me wonder how you got something like this inside your mind. Interesting.


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:02pm
My hero is Edgar Allen Poe. emo



Chihiro Ogino Sen
Community Member
iMafioso
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:12pm
Deep. o,o


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:17pm
I know, right? I wrote it in english class when I was supposed to be writing an essay on Julius Caesar. I thought this was much more interesting. x3



Chihiro Ogino Sen
Community Member
Alexander Fideles
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:18pm
It's good. Descriptions are clear. However, I'm not really getting the whole thing.


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:20pm
You're not supposed to get it. Thats what makes it creepy. *w*



Chihiro Ogino Sen
Community Member
kikan123456
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:20pm
I heart Edgar Allen Poe! You should see my room. It's filled with crows and red ribbons and his work. It's pretty damn awesome.


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 21, 2010 @ 09:23pm
Star explain to your boyfriend Knight what my little story is about. He doesnt get it.



Chihiro Ogino Sen
Community Member
Drkslayer_Dante
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Mon Feb 22, 2010 @ 04:33am
o.o nice but a lil deep, but still nice


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 22, 2010 @ 04:36am
Thanks :'3



Chihiro Ogino Sen
Community Member
Derosrabidfangirl
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Mon Feb 22, 2010 @ 01:11pm
I read this before! o:

xD

;.; But no one ever reads my journal entries...


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 22, 2010 @ 01:41pm
Dani you were one of the first people in the entire world besides me to read it. Me first because I wrote it. razz



Chihiro Ogino Sen
Community Member
Devonic Tomb
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Mon Feb 22, 2010 @ 06:39pm
oh to escape from hell is only denile and ignorance for the bliss of your own santuary. ^^


User Comments: [13] [add]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum