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My(Not So)Creative mind
This just has stuff in it that i write...its mostly emo-ish and retarded love-ish type poums...not exactly about anyone i know....and if u like what u read comment...not like anyone cares about my crappy writing...
Twilight
Excitement builds,
The carnaval's today!
It's me and her going
and on each ride we'll play.

After 2 long months,
my patience been through a test
And now the carnaval's here
and she finally said yes.

Perfect timing?
I don't think.
One thing I know
Is I can't wait.



Time passes quickly
to the grand finale.



Stars twinkle
And the farris wheel freezes.
On top we're stuck
looking in between us.

My hand was held
on to yours tight.
The fireworks start
to end the perfect night.

No kiss or hug.
You acted so sweet.
You lay your head on my shoulder
and drifted to sleep.

"The carnaval's today!"
was what I said.
I dropped her at her house.
Excitement ends.






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MUSIC_IS_FOR3V3R
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 08, 2010 @ 02:21am
I liked this. Its cute!


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