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ummm....me is me^^....lol...journal is my thoughts and what i write comes from my mind so i dont have time to stop and think what im typing so dont get mad at me&&
last breath pt8
It took a couple of blocks to get to her friend's house,Maria, a red a brick house with an open window on the second floor, she hesitated a bit knowing Maria might be outside shopping; although, she might regret it someday, she knocked on the golden wooden door three times and waited for someone to answer, as she stood there without any words, she heard the door creak open to see her best friend, Maria, but what she saw didn't prevent the puzzled look upon her face, "Hi! Do you like my new hair?" Maria happily said showing her the smooth straight hair in the color of dirty-blonde. Her mind went blank for a while as she caught on the reality of life, so it was her friend who was her friend who was holding on to her ex's neck, smiling and flirting around; unfortunatley, the door opened wider to reveal her ex's face looking right at har, she felt goosebumps as their eyes gazed upone each other's and she gulped down her knot inside her throat with bonded to it, "Hello and yes i like it" she murmured the last part to her friend, trying to force a smile upon her face and hid her suffering against a fake mask like she had done far many years ever since her mother took her last breat right in front of her and the same time far way from her.

User Comments: [2]
Community Member

Tue Jul 21, 2009 @ 01:49am

i love the way your write ^^ very discriptive whee

Community Member

Sat Dec 04, 2010 @ 12:07am

wow that is a really great story!! please keep writing!!! 3nodding

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