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A Magical Girl
This little story is dedicated to a dream I had and it led me to my girlfriend, who I love with all my heart. It was a message of hope to me and her.

A teenage girl named Namie goes to a concert with her class to listen to an orchestra. She looks to her best friend Rena who sits next to her and wonders what the whole program is about. Suddenly a giant hole blows through the wall of the auditorium and then an evil robot appears through the hole revealing a magical girl. It attacks the building causing chaos everywhere. While the audience panics and runs around in danger, the classroom teacher Miss Edwards tells everyone to head toward the door as fast as they could and she fights the robot. She shows impressive skills in martial arts, but the robot spits acid in her face and punches her stomach leaving her in a critical state and possibly blind.

Namie couldn't handle the chaos and she ran away from the attack leaving her classmates in mortal danger and sits on the ground crying because she couldn't do anything to save them. Then after she sees a woman giving birth outside in the auditorium hall, she remembers the message her mother used to say. "Happiness comes from seeing the one who gives life and the one who sees life born." When Namie hears those words echo in her mind and she says the words, transforming her into a magical girl with the same costume the evil robot is wearing. She returns to the stage and confronts the robot, who spits acid at her, but she twirls her silver rod using the skills she learned as a baton girl and reflects the acid at it, stunning it. The rod transformed further into a magical halberd and with one slice, defeated the robot. After that, it sends a cryptic message revealing that it was indeed a clone of the real magical girl from years ago. But before it finished the message, it self-destructed and blasted Namie to the wall and a hit to the back of her head knocks her out.............






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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 24, 2009 @ 09:39am
Aww thats so sweet and the story is amazing baby.Your a really good storyteller.


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