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no....my spirit falcon is gone..... i hate hackers now for life......they stole my spirit falcon......it was the most expensive thing i have bought yet and i havent even had if for more than a week and now its already gone.......dam u stupid hackers.....i have a grudge with whoever tha


OakbingNoona
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yawnz.......
hm... well, its been a while since i've wrote anything... but maybe... just maybe... i got another one... -~- here goes...

There were once two lovers... they loved each other, and yes, they loved each other... but then... its only them that loved each other, nobody else thought they should love each other... the girl is of a noble family, the boy is the son of a shepherd, naturally, there is no way those two unlikely couple is ever going to mingle and unite... or so they say... the girl, she is a pretty one, her beauty is well known in the village, and the boy... oh boy... he is quite handsome too... it was all well... and the girl one day told the boy... "what if we run away from this village, the villagers does not understand our love, my father is just as stubborn as they come, and my mother is on her knees trying to get me to marry one of those rich fat swine... oh I believe we will truly be happy once we get to somewhere else, where they do not know who we are..." The boy said "whatever you say my dear, it sounds like a good idea to me." so it was settled, the girl will find a chance, and give the boy a message on the night they elope together. But alas, the story does not go the way you think, for I am a bitter one, and the ending will never be happily ever after..." The girl's brother, a brutal person, caught wind of the news... he sought a solution to end this once and for all, and he came up with a good idea. He sent the boy, the boy that was supposed to elope with his little sister, a message saying "Tonight, we shall go." The boy was overjoyed, he said "Oh pray the heavens it went so fast and smoothly, I will finally be able to unite with my love now." The boy went to the promised destination, and there he waited... the moonlight, her gentle ray caressing the earth, and the boy... the boy waited... the wind blew gently upon his cheeks... and he waited... suddenly... he heard footsteps coming from behind... he though "ah, so my love wanted to surprise me... well, I guess one surprise wont hurt, I'll just pretend I did not notice." and so the boy waited... the footsteps came closer... closer... it came... to a halt... and the boy thought... at last... my love is here.... and then... thunk*... thunk*... the boy... his smiling face... his happy eyes... has fallen onto the hard earth... thunk* thunk*.... the boy's body... as if searching for something... fell to the ground... the roses of red... spreading... spreading... and behind this all... the brother of the girl, with an axe gleaming... bloody... The brother knew his task was done, he buried the body, and buried the head... then, he took a bloody white rose... and went home. The girl, still ignorant to the death of her love... was sleeping soundly in her room... her dreams were sweet... but suddenly... there was a white rose that fell from the sky... it drifted into her lap... splattered with blood... the girl... she felt puzzled... she felt scared... and as she woke up... she wondered... what does it mean... what does it mean... she searched... for the white rose in her dreams... for the answer to her mysterious dream... then she found it... the place... where her brother buried the body, the place where the head is buried... and on top of the head... a white rose, splattered with crimson red... that dried up into a crust of black... the girl... she felt confused... why is her love in the ground? Why is her love beheaded? and then... she pondered... who? who? who... was so cruel, who is so brutal, who hates her love so much?... as she pondered... she went home... and there... in her brother's room... she saw the white rose... splattered in red... and she knew... she knew... her brother was the one that killed her love... what will she do? what will she do.......





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tkdauronXIII
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comment Commented on: Mon Jun 01, 2009 @ 08:38am
Expand on this story and you may have a story of vengence, solace from reconciliation, and tragedy from the pain of despair. Quite the psychological thriller...yet I could see the ending coming from a distance as soon as I saw that "But..." lol! Impressive indeed.


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