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stories i made up
well this journal is about the stories that i made up the main title is called the Forbidden Friendship but some of the stories are just short ones using the characters i would like to know what people think of them
Forbidden Friendship part 2-The Explanation
Sevielle had succesfully avoided the near points of Misha's big mouth being opened. Misha allmost told the entire clan of Maxime's dishonest and forbidden peace with the fire clan member Nutella. Misha, being only a kit was traumatized by what had happened when she had been caught eavesdropping on the conversation. naturally, Tara, the earth clan's leader noticed this and her maternal instincts kicked in trying to soothe Misha's frayed nerves. Maxime still hadn't come back, no one knew if she ever would. finally, after a week of holding it in she couldnt anymore. She wanted to know what had happened and she wanted to know now. Misha had finally snapped, she didnt know where Maxime was but she knew where a map of the clans were. Without delay she sprinted into the forest with only a few curious glances in her direction. After only a few hours she was at the huge rock cliff overlooking the neverending forest. What Misha was really looking for was in the center, engraved into the stone.
Ignoring the beautiful lanscape in front of her she padded over to the map. She noticed it was, for her luck, a very detailed and explaining map while her paw ran over it in a swift gentle movement. She looked for the fire clans wherabouts thinking that if anyone knew where Maxime might be it would be Nutella. Misha took mental note of where she would have to go and started to track down the fire clan with her highly trained nose. Tracking was definitely not one of Misha's favorite techniques but it was one of her specialties. She didnt like it so much because of when another earth clan member, Roxann was teaching her to track a baby mouse she had(accidentally!)bumped into Feirsa from the water clan. Feirsa wasnt exactly on the nice and forgiving side and misha had to realize that the hard way. Feirsa growled and swatted at the kit and left a painfull but unnoticiable scratch on her ear. Roxann didnt do anything but say, "you must keep your concentration and pay attention to everyone and everything around you to perfect this strategy of hunting". Misha had never paid attention to these wise words until she hit a sharp edged rock while she was hunting a baby hare. after that she trained herself day and night to perfect it, collapsing from exhaustion now and then. So now she is a tracking expert even better than most of the other members of her clan. Now after a thirty minutes of travel the fire clans boundary lay just ahead.
she looked for Nutella, she didnt see her at all so she asked the nearest fire-clan member ready to protect herself if the fox proved to be an enemy. Eevee, which was her name glared at her but willingly told her where Nutella was. in this case she happened to be sleeping in her den. Misha rushed over to Nutella's sleeping area, jumped on her warm body and shouted with as much ferocity as she could handle, "what did you do to Maxime!" Nutella groaned and opened her eyes. then hatred began to spread across her cruel heartless eyes as she saw what had jumped on her. She grabbed the small kit and menacingly asked, "what are you doing here?" Misha being held by her scruff and dangling in the air was petrified but said as calmly as she could, "i want to know why you were with Maxime."
"well we dont always get what we want now do we?" Nutella hissed as a harsh grin spread across her face. "tell me," Misha yowled. Nutella's eyes narrowed and she quietly said, "look you pathetic cat, dont make me throw you off a mountain im trying to..."
"thats enough," Maxime commanded coming from a dark path in Nutella's den.
Misha turned her head in surprise after Nutella had had placed her back on her paws and ran to Maxime. "dont worry so much about me...it couldve gotten you killed," Maxime cooed in a nurturing tone while glaring at nutella in a shocking way. Stroking Misha with her paw she mumured, "Nutella didnt mean to frighten you little one, she really is on the good side," Maxime calmly explained. "thats what i was about to say before you interrupted me," Nutella snarled. then after a long and uninteresting talk between the two they both told Misha of how they planned on trying to bring the two clans together like the rest of the clans sort of were. they were tired of the arguements because of the situation. Misha finally understood why the two had been alone deep in the forest. she felt relieved but she noticed Nutella tense suddenly. Misha then noticed a shadow that was not her own. her eyes slowly gazed upward and she flinched and jumped back as she saw Eevee's green eye's towering over her.
Eevee's annoyingly high toned laugh came when she took in misha's reaction and giggled returning to her happy-go-lucky self,"did you tell her?"
"yes and Misha can you run back with me to the earth clan to tell Sevielle the same thing we told you?"
"of course Maxime," Misha said without hesitation. Misha and Maxime raced back home to tell Sevielle when Tara jumped in front of them and growled,"where have you been, both of you?"





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    commentCommented on: Sat Jul 18, 2009 @ 05:14am
    you write alot hella dame and u cant pass langage arts wowo


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