Here are two poems I wrote today...both rather crappy... sweatdrop
<center>The curtain pulls aside I wake, eyes wide open No more this myst surround me I'm breaking free of you at last From Such Unending Grace You called to me so deeply A siren of desire A shroud so soft as satin Yet now I know your face Love Begot Likeness Of Hell You tore me up inside A sweet bullet to my open heart Once I'd do it all for you But now you've let me die And Hell Is My Redemption</center>
Now for something on a lighter note ^_^
<center>You woke me up To my delight I sae you You're by my side like you had never left But I wonder if this is a dream Yet your touch is so complete I can feel you in me No matter how far away you are You are everything and more .............Don't.... ....................Let.... ........................Me.... ...........................Go.... I'll never be alone again My fears have slipped away Except for loosing you My Love, you brought me back I was dead before you came A void that you have filled .............Inticing.... .......................And.... .............................Yet.... ..................................My.... ....................................Own.... You have me now, forever Death breaks not this bind For if this lacks freedom I renounce my wings .............To.... ......................................Forevermore.... ..................................................................With.... ..................................................................................You....</center>
Happy0 · Community Member · Wed Nov 17, 2004 @ 03:54pm
You would! xd It reminds me of one I've read before ninja It wasn't till after I posted then that I realized that they are opposites xp
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· Community Member · Thu Nov 18, 2004 @ 12:28am
I like the first one too...
The second one reminds me of love...
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Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 06:56am
Yup...I like the first one as well 3nodding I was very happy about it but since I'm too much of a mimic sometimes I had to write something uplifting so as not to be depressed sweatdrop
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· Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 08:20pm
Try insanity.
While sadness is blue, hate is black, love is white, passion is red, etc...you know, the generic colors of emotions...insanity is like, multicolored. Prismatic. Try that, and see what effect you get.
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Viirage · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 01:00am
It's strange but sometimes I feel or think in colors and they are never the stereotypical colors that emotions are thought to be. Anyways I'll try it one of these times 3nodding
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· Community Member · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 12:50am
Really? Label some?
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Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 07:32am
Anger I sometimes see as dark blue or even goldenrod/yellow Sadness I can see a a royal purple Joy I see as red sometimes...those are the only ones I can really think of... sweatdrop