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	LoST WiThOUt
	LoST WiThOUt

<center>The sky breaks away
I never want to leave
I know you'll come
Some
Far
And
Distant
Day
The rivers run red
My heart cannot mend
The holes have swallowed me
Until
The
End
Again
What do I have to do?
No earthly bounds to this decree
The Hells will know my name
Forbidding
My
Return
I'd tear down the sun in its sullen sky
Eternity as my witness
Immortal fancies, my memories
Till
The
Rivers
Run
Dry
......................Someday....
......................I'll....
............Have
.........................You....
............Again....</center>

· Tue Nov 16, 2004 @ 12:44am · 10 Comments


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	How can you write so much!? xd gonk Offline Happy0 · Community Member · Tue Nov 16, 2004 @ 01:18pm


	What do you mean? 0_o whee Offline · Community Member · Tue Nov 16, 2004 @ 08:53pm


	Damn...once again, bravo buddy. Offline Viirage · Community Member · Tue Nov 16, 2004 @ 10:33pm


	I mean what I mean; I'm completely baffled by the frequency you can write these high-quality poems. ( I do realize your poems are non-rhyming, but I do not regard that as a mark of superiority. However, now that I think about it, I guess that kind of thing complicates the writing process... ) Offline Happy0 · Community Member · Wed Nov 17, 2004 @ 02:18am


	I write in free-verse most of the time (a habit cast out of writing poems in English sweatdrop ) But I thank you for your compliments though I doubt that they are really that good sweatdrop @Raziel- Thankies, My friend 3nodding Offline · Community Member · Wed Nov 17, 2004 @ 05:28am


	I agree with Mista' Happy here. Where do you get all of this inspiration!? Offline Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 06:57am


	Where do I get the inspiration? Well...emotions really...from me or those around me...I write to get things out sometimes since I'm horrible at talking to people on such matters sweatdrop Offline · Community Member · Sat Nov 20, 2004 @ 08:23pm


	Emotions...go figure. xp Usually they are the greatest muses of our mind, but I still prefer insanity. Emotions are too difficult to take care of. sweatdrop What goes through your head when you write these things? Offline Viirage · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 01:04am


	I want to say really bad anime but I know you'd never go for it xd So I'll say that I just can't remember. Sometimes nothing goes through my mind while I'm writing... Offline · Community Member · Sun Nov 21, 2004 @ 07:04am


	Bad....anime? Like Knights of the Zodiac mixed with Power Rangers? Offline Viirage · Community Member · Sat Nov 27, 2004 @ 07:38am

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