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CHEEZE AND CRACKERS
Unicorns...are...AMAZING. Yes it's all true....Unicorns make RAINBOWS...WITH THEIR BUTT.
Some Random Poem


Title....i havent decided yet....

My Thoughts:
I guess it's okie....could be improved....alot...sorry, but no rhyming stuff...i such at thoes....really i do.

About: Girl...dead....dosnt know....remember....family....friends....then discovers....she's dead...ok end of story.

Here I stood
Alone
Scared
Lost

Why was i alone?
They said they were my friends
In sickness and in health
Just like a wedding
They said they loved me
Here to nurture me

Parents lie
Fake words to ears
Somehow I cant stop to think of my brother
Tall and lean- like a tree
Alawys the joker
Even my dog who alawys seemed
Oh so stupid
Loyal as ever
But why not now?

The thoughts of enemy's laughter
A show of victory
Sneeking giggles
Nails on a chalk board
As I cry.
Again...alone
I look behind me
The cheer and joy
Smiles

Foward white mist of oblivion
Where do I go?
Foward?
Backwards?
I go foward
My feet stepping like music
Tap tap tap
Each step was a symphany to my ears
A tearful symphony
I discover my last

Lost life
Lonely to roam dark mist
Discover
Mystical mist- protal
Heaven

How did this happen?
New tears fall
Alone
Peace at last

-V






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NIHILiate IV
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 04, 2009 @ 06:13am
Now come on..all poetry doesnt need to rhyme...it is about how it flows, and what it means..and this is a perfect example of that biggrin
It is great...you seem to be so sad ..emotion driven in such short words are always the best and you prove that...as well as the fact that is one of the best non rhyming poems i have read in ..wel for almost ever biggrin


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 06, 2009 @ 05:44am
I haven;t made a poem since.... last year .... in january... yeah. But this is beaitiful It's very dark. And depressing in the good way. If there is a good way...



iButton
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minixcakez
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 10, 2009 @ 01:01am
i ♥ The ending its very discripted ^^


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