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IF YOU DIDNT READ MY LAST JOURNAL ENTRY, OR JUST DONT REMEMBER, PRESS NEXT THEN COME BACK!!! "IT" four months later... the couple from the last poem had a real big break up about 3 months later. she comes to his house a month after the break up, and professes her secret to him. he says... Damn… I feel like I should flee, Not to say I am, but this isn’t how it ought to be, I thought that we weren’t even two, and now you say we’re three, What now, should I propose? You want me to get down on my knee? I just don’t understand… what do you want from me? she says... You can’t understand… is it beyond your “conception”, Well it’s not beyond mine, obviously, I thought we had a connection, But that’s just what we get for not using protection, A little one made in our reflection, And all we can do is give it our love and affection, he argues... Wait… I’m not ready to be a father of any kind, And besides how do you even know its mine? I know your game, your just trying to get in my mind, You just want my money and my time, Well I’m not given you a moment or a dime, she screams... You heartless b***d... and you won’t even bother? Damn… I thought you’d at least be down for your kid, I thought you were smarter! But now you couldn’t believe all the regrets I’m starting to harbor! I gave you my soul and my body and you won’t be there for your daughter?! YOU ****** DEADBEAT YOU DON’T DESERVE THE TITLE OF A FATHER!! This is like some "trapped in the closet" type stuff, no homo. I wrote this poem to show how you never really know someone until "push comes to shove." To show how things can go from bad to worst in a relationship. Also to show you should protect yourself, unless your trying to get the bun in the oven(which is not recomended). And to the dedicated, im so sorry im late... you know who you are. This all about you and me, ya know. Much love... lol jk

Posted by: Dynamite_The_Cool Sat Jan 10, 2009 @ 04:07am

im not worried it's more fish n' the sea,
besides im on my mision to be....

THE COOLEST

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XxMiss_SmexiliciousxX
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Commented on: Sat Jan 10, 2009 @ 05:03am


	Awesome poem it makes alot of sence :] not like other people biggrin its nice.

Commented on: Sat Jan 10, 2009 @ 03:19pm


	oo i like the part where she calls him a heartless little b*****d but its true that happend to my brother he fought with the girl but it turned out the kid really wasn`t his you think you know someone

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Commented on: Sat Jan 10, 2009 @ 04:40pm


	aww....w0w it was . . . wow =), wat i meant to say is that i loved it and i didnt know how to say it

Commented on: Sat Jan 10, 2009 @ 06:02pm


	me likey lol

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Commented on: Sat Jan 31, 2009 @ 04:57pm


	i like the poem it nice biggrin heart

Commented on: Mon Feb 02, 2009 @ 06:45pm


	3nodding cool poem. biggrin

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Commented on: Thu Feb 19, 2009 @ 01:05am


	of course u knock her up lol

Commented on: Mon Mar 02, 2009 @ 05:32am


	Wow this is a really good poem =) i like... How ya been?

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Commented on: Sat Mar 14, 2009 @ 02:37am


	thats good but i heard that st somewhere i cant put the cool on it st but overall good nemo whee

Commented on: Sat Apr 11, 2009 @ 05:28pm


	i helped make that cuz nemo real dumb he couldnt put those words together until i put lil bit on dare then he started goin so yall should good poem marquis lol just kidddin good work cuz if i made that he would of whooped the *** a

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Commented on: Tue Dec 22, 2009 @ 09:58pm


	on the bottom paragraph where you said it was to ur dedicated you were kidding that was scary for a sec cuz i was surprised i was like woah this guy's got it goin on like that haha i'm sure u do but i was thinkn i thot he was above that haha those paragraphs/sentences after the entries are always a great way to end

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