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The Brave Boy Who Survive in Wrong Time.
i wrote the story. I make it up, also please check my sentence, and please comment! ;D
One shiny day, the teenage boy walking on the rocky sidewalk.
The gangs approching him and stop his way. The taeenage boy paused and the gang leader appear front of him. The leader get closer to him and said in very cold voice; "Do u have any moneys on u?" The leader asked. He shake his head. Suddenly, He chock the teen boy's neck. "Where is ur damn money!" He shout. The boy struggling with brave from leader's grasp. Then leader decide to bullying him till he surrender.

For hour later, The boy fall on the hard ground with impact. Then the leader finally said; "Are u surrender?" He ask with cold angry voice. For few moment, The boy is trying to stand, moaning with pain. He seem not to give up. The leader getting mad and mad, punch right the injury boy, and fall on the ground again. The boy is unconscious. The leader took his wallet and leave him alone in damp area in city.
The leader pause and turn to him, "My name is Jacomb and don't forget my name!" He shout mocking and leave.
He was returning safely in hostipal. He was so sad and no wallet with him. He is about have a revenge.





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