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Die Inside Lovely eyes, Staring, Head cocked to one side, Blood drips. A knife on the ground Next to your feet, Covered In the Red Haunting liquid. You couldn't have Done it, She was the Love of Your life. Impossibe. Impossibly dead. Thoughts of suicide Dance. Knife lies at your Feet, the Feet of a killer. Die inside.

Posted by: ohsocruel Fri Nov 28, 2008 @ 09:57pm

[{Love♥always.}]

avi art?

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ohsocruel
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Fri Nov 28, 2008 @ 10:00pm

Yeah, I know, kind of freaky, but that's the mood I was in at the time. I usually don't write like this, but I like to explore all aspects of poetry. I guess this is gonna make an impression, though, for my first entry. Oh well.

pandangel
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Sat Nov 29, 2008 @ 02:36pm

the mood is so deep. death defining. >.<;; but it wuz gud!! *applause* ;D

RoxOli
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Sun May 31, 2009 @ 05:10am

very nice. deep. emotionly made. the best way to write. real feeling behind it. it's what makes the work reach out to others no matter how the may take it. but i can promise that each time it's read that person will feel what you were. and that is what makes it write.
no pun intended.
keep it up wink

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