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My poems
this is a place were i post my poems whitch are my true feelings
addiction lament
Intangible emotion that crest on the horizon leaving me in reaching vain,
impossible dreams haunt my slumber leaving me in nothing but pain.
your words fall cold upon my aching heart chilling me to the core, making each moment spent in your hold a y, emotional war. my fist wish to beat upon your chest, my lips wish to scream out their . but what good willit do to act out my rage, would it change the course of our fate? helpless, i wait, inside of the void my love for you has created. watching from a distance as you slip away into darkness you own will has faded.

love brings pain, turns to , becomes indiffrence................. and the light dies.






User Comments: [2]
Bunny_ Wunny
Community Member





Thu Oct 06, 2005 @ 01:30am


Loved that one too!

Constructive critisicm? not really but I think... "pian" = pain, "emotinal"= emotional, "wathcing"= watching.

Good poem.! Loved it!

luvs ya!


lonely_forever8899
Community Member





Sat Dec 08, 2007 @ 05:29pm


This reminds me of somthing...


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