This is gonna be my first poem on my journal, if you may, please comment and say what you think, don't hold back, I can take it, I wanna improve a bit because I know I can do better, I'm just not doing better. Also, title suggestions for ones I don't have will be awsome!
Title: Fade Away
As day turns to night
I start to fade away
You start to fade from my sight
But all I wanted was to get away
From all those lies
that you have told
I didn't need my life to be good-byes
and I've lost all of my gold
Just because I went the other way
Because you have lost control
I'm lost every single day
That's why I took the role
To be able to fade away
As day turns to night
I start to fade away
You start to fade from my sight
But all I wanted was to get away
From all those lies
that you have told
I didn't need my life to be good-byes
and I've lost all of my gold
Just because I went the other way
Because you have lost control
I'm lost every single day
That's why I took the role
To be able to fade away
By: G4Server
Community Member