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The Last Good Fight
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Water Spirit
Chapter 1 continuation
ok peoplez if u didn't already kno i have a story and this is the second page of it!!!!! so go to the page before this one!!!!!!
ok anyway.......
"water spirit?" 16 asked. "i don't believe this."
"you thou not? Dust thou think thy a joke? Thou shall feel the wrath of thou Water Spirit, Hitsukane!" as Ame spoke the water moved rapidly and grew to high tide faster than usual. It was already up to 16's feet.
"ok, ok!! calm down!! I believe thou i mean you!" 16 was picking up lingo from Ame already.
the water calmed and the clouds cleared. "thank thou. Shall i return to thou waters?"
"huh?"
"i must return to thou waters i which cometh from."
"wait, maybe there was a reason for you being washd up on the shore. Maybe they wanted you to do something here on the what you call the mortal lands." 16 was pretty smart and clever.
"thou might be true," Ame turned towards the ocean and announced, "High Council, What thou wanteth me to do? Give thee a sign!"
The water sturred then released. Ame completely understood this. "yes thou accept!"
"you accepted what?"
"thy now haveth a mission to find the Sacré-Prince, the sacred prince!"
"who's that?"
"he be thou long lost prince of thy water world. Searched for, for many years. He beeth the key to thou waters survival."
"hmm, he seems important." 16 was also thinking about his father, what would he do with Ame?
"where should thou find a place to stay as thou mission comenthes?"
16 hesitated, "y-you can stay at my place for a bit...."
Ame's face lit up. "thanketh thou pure and noble spirit! Lead thou way!"
16 guided Ame to his house very slowly. He was thinking how his father would react to her, would he let her stay? would he beat the crap out of 16? They finally reached his house. 16 was forced to use the front door because they couldn't climb up the way 16 went down, it was tricky.
16 rang the door bell and the door opened......
"16?" His father was shocked thinking that 16 was upstairs.
"just let us through." 16 and Ame were inside the house but halfway still outside.
"you can't talk to your father like that, Murderer!" 16's father pushed 16's head hard towards the wall and it bounced off the bulletin board, landing on pushpins and papers.
Ame got angry. "dust thou hurt this pure hearted soul? thou shall commend for thou sins and fall to the might of god." It started to get windy and dark. She raised her palm towards 16's father. "thou shall not be forgiven by thou sins!!"
16's father started to gasp like his breath was being forced into Ame's palms, he was dying. 16 woke up and grabbed Ame's hand. "no, no Ame please."
"but thou has brought bloodshed to a pointless arguement. He dust also hurt a pure soul. shall i ask of the reason?"
"he's the only family i have left, i mean....it's not his fault for hurting me. It's mind, i caused my mothers death. I finally realize it was my fault. Mine." 16 pulled her hand own and the air was returning to his father.
"m-monster!! monster!! get away!" his father shouted.
Ame looked at the tainted soul and snapped her fingers. 16's father forgot everything that happened. "just don't let me see that girl anywhere around me, cuz if she is then she gets what you get."
"fine." 16 quickly led Ame upstairs as she glared at his father.
"you are bleeding." Ame put 16 on the bed and looked at the side of his head. There were push pins lodged in his head but it was only 1.
"oh, i forgot."
"why does thou take such torment from father?"
"it's like what i said back there. He's my dad and the only family i have left, what would i do if he dies. I know it's not his fault, it's mine." 16 teared up a bit but held it back.
"you are thou purest soul thee have ever met."
16's eyes met Ame's beautiful purple eyes. "uh, thanks."

continues tomorrow see u then!!!





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xXFalling_RedXx
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comment Commented on: Sat Sep 13, 2008 @ 12:45am
xd cant wait


comment Commented on: Sat Sep 13, 2008 @ 03:06am
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