Uhm well I finally figured out how to use my journal. That's good... So I'll be posting some updates on other stuff going on with me later, maybe... We'll see. Lol. Well I have a poem I want to post; I wrote this a few weeks ago. If anyone reads this, I'd really like to know what you thought of it, please. And I will let my writing speak for itself:
*Diamonds*
Dripping with diamonds so carefully,
Is the lonely one born of misery,
You will get lost in his depths,
Never one to give up his death.
Crying and screaming, unmerciful air,
Making you wait for his cold glare,
Lying is only proving your demise,
With finality, always hiding in his eyes.
Such beauty lies therein waiting,
As within cold hearts I am debating,
Wondering if you will ever stop to know,
What lies beyond that deathly glow.
Glittering, shimmering like diamonds, I see,
Thousands of your hearts are there waiting for me,
Hiding the ice that has procured there,
Wafting gently, waning through your hair.
As I fade, we shall all fade away,
Life is viewed only in shades of gray,
Lift my lips to whisper to you,
These forbidden words that burn right through.
A shine to outlast all the other diamonds in this sea,
Imploring to ignore that dreadful morbid plea,
Combing gently through your hair with my fingertips,
Lusting after one impure touch of your lips.
Lovable things, the one who surely jests,
Scratching and clawing inside of your chest,
Revealing all the diamonds glittering within,
Only to find they are rubies, dripping with sin.
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I mostly just put my poems here... Only the ones that I see are best. I never really write about myself, if you want to know you'll have to ask.
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