I would like to ask that thoes who read these please tell me what you think of them. keep in mind that these can be used as songs or poems.
I DON'T KNOW YOU (title subject to change)
I've seen you in my dreams
I've heard you in my head
But I Don't know who you are
You listen in my time of need
You hear me when I call
You know me better than anyone
My friends don't know about you
I don't know you
But I feel like I'm falling for you
I'm falling for someone I don't know
Your in my dreams
Your in my head
Your the reason why I'm living
And I can't get over you
Who are you
Where are you
Why are you doing this to me
I don't know you
But I feel like I'm falling for you
I'm falling for someone I don't know
You know everything about me
How can I know nothing about you
Let me learn about you
Let me know you
But most of all
Let me help you
Let me love you
But I don't know you
And I feel like I'm falling for you
I'm falling for someone I don't know
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I'm falling for someone who doesn't exist.
That was the fisrt one. i hope you liked it. let me know! please??? that way i'll know weather to keep going with my writting or stop! i dont care if you tell me they suck! but i do have oone more so bare with me!!
SURROUNDED BY DARKNESS
Surrounded by darkness
Here the blind see
And the deaf hear
But I am trapped
I can see it
I can feel it
But its so addictive I can't escape
Surrounded by darkness
Help me
Save me
But I don't want you to
Leave me to be consumed
I can see it
I can feel it
But its so addictive I can't escape
Surrounded by darkness
It's my only friend
Its there all the time
I wish it wouldn't leave me alone
So it stays
I can see it
I can Feel it
But its so addictive I don't want to escape anymore
Surrounded by Darkness
Ok so that was the second one. I hope you liked that one! if not tell me. actualy tell me if you liked it too! and tell me if you have some suggestions! i wont get offended or mad at all! and i will update them if i make any changes on the original.
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