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Darkie's Mind put down in cyberspace I like to put down in here my poems and maybe some of whatever comes to my mess up mind.


DarkAngelsCry
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Tears to Shed....
If I touch a burning candle I can feel the pain
If you cut me with a knife it's still the same
And I know her heart is beating
And I know that I am dead
Yet the pain here that I feel
Try and tell me it's not real
For it seems that I still have a tear to shed

If I touch a burning candle I can feel no pain
In the ice or in the sun it's all the same
Yet I feel my heart is aching
Though it doesn't beat it's breaking
And the pain here that I feel
Try and tell me it's not real
I know that I am dead
Yet it seems that I still have some tears to shed





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Blixey
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comment Commented on: Thu Jul 03, 2008 @ 06:56am
wow that's sad...but so well done! I give you an A


comment Commented on: Fri Jul 11, 2008 @ 03:09am
i bow to your poetic work my love



Foxkid
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