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Wow I have plenty of time
Chapter One of the Worst book ever!!
Okay so right now i have nothing to do so be ready to read the worst
thing you will ever read.

Chapter One-The Story
"Once upon a time there was a beast. She was a cursed beast. When
she was a little girl she was called a witch. To keep her from getting
burned on a cross her father, like any other made her have an everlasting life. This magic was a dark magic evil takes over half of
her soul. When the mob if villagers came to burn her she turned into the
terrible beast. There was no survivors except one. He was just a child of
three (years old). Now he goes on telling his story to anyone who would like to
here. His name is Roughan. So of to bed now."
"But Granpa Roughan do we gave to after such a good story how do you
expect us to sleep," protested a small little child.
His voice was very melodic and just made your ears cry if he was sad
or be gleeful when he was happy. He was as short as a average chair
seat. His eyes was a deep green. When you looked in to them you would
get lost in thought. But most of all he had extraordinary hair. His hair
was a plain brown color and went just a quarter of an inch below his eyes.
He liked to put it to the side so it would just get out of the way of
his eyes. His hair was soft and silky. He had hair that needed no
attention. His hair was what girl's would die for to have. His hair
looked so plain and yet it stood out the most.
"Well I don't have the energy as I did when I was a kid. You should
treasure that. I need some sleep."
"Okay okay you win I will," the brown hair child mumbled, "Granpa? Is
that story true? You know the one about the woman beast and you being
the only surviver?"
"Of course it is. I was in my bed at the time I heard a rattle. The
whole house seemed to shake. The house started to crumble and fall in.
I ran down the stairs and got outside just in time. Hey do you wanna
know something I never told anyone? Well promise you will be able to
not get scared and you will sleep after this okay?"
The child eagerly nodded his head.
"Okay so that was when I was the monster. I almost died of fright.
All I saw was the back of her. She was covered in a deep yellow slime
and it rank of rotting roadkill. She had weird spike like things sticking
out of her. I had nightmares about it and still do today. Well off you
lively whiper snaper off to bed. Don't let the bed bugs bite."
the child sat bewildered then realized that his granpa told him to go
to bed. He got up on his little paws and hugged his granpa and bounced
off to bed.

Do you like it I don't think it's good, but if you want I can continue.
Oh also tell me of you find any errors I'm using my itouch so it's
harder to type so yeah I found a lot already. Thank you.
Ps: I don't know where the hair thing is gonna go, but all main
characters something must be strange so yeah.

~Alex Lofftus heart



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Run_like_the_wind
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 05, 2008 @ 12:44am
Wow... lovely...


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