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The Face of Victory
Mr. Bowie didn’t waste a single unit of time, it was crucial for Spencer survivable. He turned to Lynn. “Release Brittnie and I shall fetch her sister.”

Something within Lynn was screaming that all this was bad idea and it was going to come back to bite them in the a**, but she resisted her consciences and when on getting up with a tremendous struggled. She walked over the immobilized Brittnie, she took the golden watch from her like it never being stuck to her with that invisible-adhesive.

“You---”

“Put your hand down Brittnie and bring your sister, time is crucial!”

Brittnie ran passed by Lynn and directly into Karlam, Elisabeth, Beck and Bridget.

“Hey! We need to go!” shouted Brittnie. This shouts brought Beck back to reality just moments before the bladed-boomerangs came back to hit him, and with swift move of his fingers he transformed them into dynamite cartridges, with shorten fuse.

Karlam erected a wall from the ground, just as natural as if he done this his entire life. The explosions were powerful enough that Bridget ended up defending her sister, while the wall Karlam had created to protect him and the knight was demolished by the second blast.

“Were lucky were alive,” he said rubbing the dust out off his hair. “but they escaped.”

The knight waited until the smoke cleared to check twice for them, but in all honestly he didn’t care much for capturing the criminals, his report on Beck and Elisabeth was nearly finished. Bridget was already long ways off accompany by her sister, who stop check in the insane Keith.

“Boss we should take him with us! He is after all one of us!”

Mr. Bowie was sweating from head to toe; he knew that if he brought news of Nathan‘s dead he would be severely punish. He could not allowed himself to bring another corpse. It then came to him that bring him Keith would surely claim one hell of reward. “Bring him!” order Mr. Bowie

Happily following her orders, Brittnie brought back Keith who somehow had called off Fade to Black. “Now let go off him and we shall leave immediately.” Mr. Bowie negotiation skills were not quite what he wanted them to be. Being more then use to using raw force to solve problems. With unsatisfied desired to kill each one of them, Mr. Bowie left for the hill, Joaquin’s hands were trembling. One wrong move from either party and Spencer would end up dead.

“I take it from here kid.” said Mr. Bowie taking Spencer’s pale hand and slowly rising him up. Joaquin believed in his words and drew away the sword from Spencer’s neck. Mr. Bowie could have crushed him there, but he keep to his words and left with the other Pet Shop Boys.

Joaquin was still at shock, he had somehow made them retrieved, and he was not injured. Then it clicked too him, Lark! Coming down the hill he could see that Zora had manage to stop the bleeding from Lark’s wounds but he was still suffering a rather large amount of pain. Joaquin found himself scanning the grounds for a “healer”, but there was none!

“Hey help me out here!” said Zora to Milo, who tried painfully to get up.

“I can’t heal this much tissue.” he said looking at Lark’s destroyed hands.

Bsano approached the situation too, most of this time he had been hiding. Joaquin notice something odd about him, he seemed rather sick and paled with scale-like plates around his hands.

“You morons needs my help.” said Karlam walking toward Lark’s body. Bsano hid most of his body behind the remains of vegetation, the others looked at him with confuse but continue to wander about Lark’s situation. “I finish up the job then.” Karlam held Milo’s arm for a second while using his other one to hold on to Bsano who dispersedly wanted to run away. “Fine! Gosh! Your free now.” Bsano ran away into some deep bushes. While Karlam began the healing process.

“I’m going to need your help too Milo. I mimic a minimum amount of your stimulating cell-process, the problem is your power work by accelerating cell-division to cause rapping burst of regeneration tissue.” said Karlam while Milo nodded in silence. “Here, I by taking the right hand while you take the left hand, and I well sealed off the wound with some of the paranormal DNA I barrowed from Bsano. Alright?”

Milo remains silent like all the others carefully lessening to the procedure. Karlam started first; he rejuvenated Lark’s right hand while the amateur Milo took the left, it was a slow process that Joaquin watched carefully. Once finish Karlam used a combination of Milo’s power and Beck’s to alter the DNA in Lark’s body, to prevent from his organism rejecting the new blood Zora had transferred from Milo and himself. Burning off the last remains of his accumulated power Karlam emitted a ripple, healing all the minor injuries of those around him. Zora and Lynn were back to there feet and suddenly joining forces with each other.

The familiar face knight appear moments later. “I say, why don’t we give this man a proper burial?” he said pointing at Nathan’s corpse. Lynn amazing recovery was not only part of Karlam’s wave but her own will to by with her sons, the newly infatuated mother pay little to no attention to Joaquin who sat in a rock staring at the men digging the grave.






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Shadowmanxp
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commentCommented on: Sat May 10, 2008 @ 03:12pm
Not bad. -In reality, you can't actually change someone's HLA -these are markers on everyone's cells that help tell weather something's supposed to be inside your body or not -like a germ, or a blood cell.. the HLA -or Human Leukocyte Antigens are set from a very early stage in life.. like when you're probably one cell in size smile . -Think of antigens like tickets.. if you've got the right one, the body won't reject you if you're foreign.. the blood has like... 3 kinds of antigens that can show... O, B, A, and AB.. O only takes O, B only B, A only A, and AB can take them all.. -O has no antigens.. so everyone can recieve O type blood..

-Spencer's not dead yet in your story is he? *had a friend called Spencer a long time ago*


commentCommented on: Sun May 11, 2008 @ 04:57am
Thank you for the Doctor’s note, it does quite help sometimes because I have no idea of how that field works so its nice in a while I get a helping hands.

And no Spencer is not dead yet.



Renton Noah
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Shadowmanxp
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commentCommented on: Wed May 21, 2008 @ 12:18pm
well, come to think of it.. I think it's better inaccurate since reality would lend the story to really boring circumstances.. Just stick to your way of writing -and better yourself wherever you can.


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