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DARKNESS


Darkness Unfirls around me Light Escapes my mind Words compact together music in the bind Wind dances in your hair whispers in your ear tells you what to write to be cheerful and carefree Feel the grass below you soft and wet with dew Dripping music from its blades Bringing out the new Darkness is thinnig Sun is breaking through horizons becoming brighter whenever i'm with you! dusk to dawn heart Change is good for you · Wed Apr 09, 2008 @ 09:45pm · 6 Comments


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darkness_of_white
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Thu May 08, 2008 @ 09:36pm

I really liked it!!!! The only thing that you need to work on is some spelling issues!!!!!!!!!! Amazing-ness!!!

paninni_shayhime
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Tue May 13, 2008 @ 09:29pm

its cool like a poem or something!
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Matthias555
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Wed Jul 16, 2008 @ 01:22am

ninja AWESOME POEM it is really nice. Nice job. ninja

Poison Fairy Sennyo
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Fri Oct 10, 2008 @ 11:28pm

I really enjoyed this poem! Especially the first stanza, er whatever it's called (yep, pretty much failed that part in English class last year, yuuup) as well as the second part with the whispering wind.

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Thu Jan 01, 2009 @ 02:21pm

xd thanx!

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