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Angel_Dancer87's Journal I enjoy writting poetry, and many different types of boooks, I enjoy reading as well, and I try to work out and I enjoy dancing. I plan to just keep my friends up to date on my day to day life, and let them know how I'm doing.


Angel_Dancer87
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Withered Rose
Hi, Journal

I recently wrote this poem after my fiance broke off our engagment; please feel free to let me know what you think and thank you for taking the time to read and for letting me know what you think.

Angel_Dancer87



Withered rose petals lay scattered on the carpeted floor
In unorganized disarray as they would have fallen that day
Dressed in white with eyes shining bright with tears of love and joy
I would have loved to walk toward you on our wedding day

My Dad would have proudly walked me down to you
Dressed in fine black boots with your hat put away
and tenderly squeezed my hand before he let go
Giving away his baby girl on that now lost June day

Wishing with all my heart that sometime soon
a blessing would come and take all of my pain away
But reality is taking hold, your love is bleeding inside
Phone call seemed an out; just don't think you could stay

But now I know that it wasn't meant to happen
At least we found out before we both said, "I do"
We fought with a passion neither could deny
Now I sit here alone, silently crying and missing you

Withered rose petals lay scattered on the carpeted floor
In unorganized disarray as they would have fallen that day
Dressed in white with eyes shining bright with tears of love and joy
I would have loved to walk toward you on our wedding day





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ICP_Tech9Lover
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comment Commented on: Tue Jun 03, 2008 @ 02:32pm
Angel_Dancer87, that's a great poem, your emotion is clear in every word, wonderful job; maybe you should submit it to the poetry forum.


comment Commented on: Sat Jun 07, 2008 @ 03:04am
Thank you.



Angel_Dancer87
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Lacy7987
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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 27, 2008 @ 06:28pm
That's a very good poem, I agree you should post it in the poetry forum.


comment Commented on: Sat Jun 28, 2008 @ 06:12pm
Thank you; I'm glad you like it. You know what, I think I will post it in the poetry forum.



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