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Name: Mika

Age: 19 (actual age is around 59 or so)

Height: 5' 3"

Mate: None

Breed: Vampire

Personal Profile: her hair is midnight black that seems to shine and is down to her hips, sparkling eyes that shift color, and porcelain skin. She has dark circles under her eyes. Her skin is pale and icy. She looks about average weight but a little on the thin side. she tries to wear outfits that would cover the majority of her body. In the sun her body sparkles magnifying her beauty. She has no fangs.

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Personality: positive yet realistic. She is distant from being alone for so long yet she desires company more then anything else.

Bio: Her human past is one of a normal girl that did normal girl things, such as dress up, talk to friends, shop, that sort of thing. Her parents had died in a car accident on their anniversary when she was 16. She decided to live with her older sister who was 20 at the time. After a house fire at 18 that killed her sister. She was forced to find a low paying job on the out skirts of the large town. During one of her long walks home, at around 19, she was chased and bitten but managed by some miracle to get away. She got back to her apartment and changed. When she woke up she went after people. After she had satisfied her thirst she began seeing things differently. She decided even though she couldn't bite people with out killing them or turning into vampires she would simply steal from a blood bank, that wasn't to hard and she could still have human blood without harming anyone. She lives on her own now but she is lonely.

Sign: A black Rose

Ability: To become almost unnoticeable

((Character inspired by Stephenie Myer's Twilight trilogy.))






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Kitsune Keli
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 03, 2008 @ 10:49pm
Nice, a few things you'll want to touch up if this is for english...

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midnight black that seems to shine and is down to her hips, sparkling eyes that shift color, and porsilen skin.


You should say her hair is midnight black? just that sentece is confusing.

Also porsilen is spelled "porcelain"
and

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there aneversery when she was 16

you'll want "their anniversary"

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by some mirical

spell it "miracle"

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She dicided even

you want "decided"


That should about do it. Nice story though.


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