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@_@; .... (my only GOOD poem ever)
[: :] Boiler World [: :]


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I had a nightmare that would not quit

And trapped me tight as a tourniquet

To the very wounds upon my fingers.

My cruel curse in this way lingers:

The smell of old is the smell of dark,

And rusted machines are grotesque and stark

Against a background of chemical grime

That coats their edges with oil and slime.

As angled and foreign as alien races,

Puking out smoke from their bolt-studded faces,

While gray ugly creatures attend to their joints

Firespouts punctuate the smog at points.

In an orange glare and scorching flash,

My own gray flesh my eyes do catch;

Instantly my brain is taxed,

For these limbs of mine are like hairless wax.

At the end of this wretched arm my hand

Is a skeletal knot of fingers and

Crusted with calluses, worn and bleeding

From twisting bolts on machines that are breathing.

Retching up in this misshapen gray chest,

A boiling scream starts to wrest

As the other gross creatures force me back,

Fusing my body with a rust-diseased rack.

My shrieking throat soured with tar

And like corrosive moss the rust did mar

My limbs, now bound by jointed vents

That funneled smoke up from my bowels incensed.

The meters fused to my rusted face,

Pointed red needles twitching in place,

At the infernal numbers as the fire roared,

Gagging up embers while the dirty flames soared.

The bald deformed creatures scuttled quickly by,

Taking no notice of the sparks shooting high.

No gray creature stayed to tend this machine,

And my furnace exploded, and I woke from this dream.

Woke to a burst of filthy hot gas,

Shrieking at me as the others hurried past,

Already tending to their own rusted boilers

As they tightened their bolts and squeezed at their oilers.

I raised myself up with my gray, callused hands,

Remembering existence was no fairy-land,

And hastened along the soot-filthy scene

Of solid buildings made of screaming machines.


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Mitsukeru Furidomu
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  • User Comments: [3]
    Ichigo Desa-ru
    Community Member





    Wed Nov 28, 2007 @ 07:09pm


    Ohh, very interesting.


    Mitsukeru Furidomu
    Community Member





    Thu Nov 29, 2007 @ 01:25am


    Yeahhhhh... um, I was tired of people making poems about pretty things.
    That's too easy, and the rest of the world is running out of pretty words.
    And I happen to really dislike machines...
    ...mainly because they cause so much pollution.
    They're kind of taking over the world because people are too lazy to do stuff the old-fashioned way.
    Yeah.
    So, that's how this thing happened.


    DemonVampire180
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    Sun Sep 07, 2008 @ 11:08pm


    This is really, really interesting. The word flow is really great, and it's probably one of the best rhyming poems I've heard/read, in a long time.


    Love is something you're supposed to protect so why do so many people try to destroy it?
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