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just a peom that i wrote. its really bad but whatever. its ok.
This is a poem that i wrote. I suck at making poems but i tried.


Love and Pain

I'm sorry for the heartache
I'm sorry for the pain
You bring me to tears
Then I take you there
You have loved me
You have hurt me
But I'm grateful for it all
The pain is sometimes great
But its nothing compared to
What you have gone through
Thanks for everything you have done
I just want to tell you I love you
I'm not going to lie
Some parts have been hard
But that's no reason to leave you
I don't ever want to say goodbye
Every time I sigh
I'm holding back emotion
To me crying is weakness
Others say its not
It brings back memories
Some good and some not
Loving you is all I have
Leaving you would hurt so bad
Because of the feeling I have
I've never felt this way before
There is some great pain
And the love is so strong
I feel I have killed you inside
It’s like I’ve changed you
I feel so bad
There's nothing I can do
This all started
I mean the love and that pain
With just one question
Then argument
I thought you were a jerk
But that changed fast
I’m just saying
Over the time the love has grown stronger
I hope that feeling stays forever
To me you’re the best thing that ever happened to me
I hope you feel the same

----- Sammy

Yeah i know its not the best but i tried.





Uchiha-Suzume
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    Haruka-Uchiha
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    commentCommented on: Sun Aug 17, 2008 @ 06:11pm
    I didn't know you wrote this! *Claps* It's really good Sammy! YAY! 4laugh


    commentCommented on: Thu Sep 11, 2008 @ 10:38pm
    Awesome Poem Sammy ^_^ i think its good, better than mine thats for sure sweatdrop if you ever want to read one ask me ok?



    Yuki_Sasuke_InuYasha
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    anonymous-twilight
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    commentCommented on: Thu Nov 27, 2008 @ 09:27pm
    very nice my love ^^


    commentCommented on: Wed Dec 31, 2008 @ 12:03am
    Very nice Rythem, it's a good poem, a bit on the down side but good all the same. xd Just one writer to another,

    ~Eternal~



    The Eternaly Damned
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