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Ra1k1ra_Kakashi SnJ
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Kakashi's Penitence (part 2)
Kakashi: Eh? "Kakashi's Penitence"?

Me: Yup! That's what I'm going to call the fanfic! 4laugh Otherwise, you can call it Adversity and Penitence.

Raikira: So... What's going to happen next? eek

Me: *shrugs* I don't know... Hm... Well, I have several ideas, but I don't know which one to choose. crying

Naruto: How about something with me in it? mrgreen

Sakura: *pounding Naruto on the head* Baka! Not everything's about you!

Naruto: crying Oi... Sakura-chan. Why'd you hit me? The show is called Naruto after all.

Me: Naruto's right. But... This is fanfiction and Kakashi's my favorite character. Hehehehe... xp Deal with it, Fishpaste.

Naruto: neutral Fishpaste?

Me: biggrin Well then, shall we start the fanfic? 4laugh

Raikira: Please, do.

Me: Wait. I have to put in another picture of Kakashi first exclaim exclaim exclaim xd

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There! Yay! ANBU Kakashi! xp

stare Oi, Kashi-chan.

Kakashi: *flips a page of his book* Hm?

Me: Did you know that my mom doesn't like you?

Kakashi: *looks up with a raised eyebrow*

Me: Yup! xd It's true! She says that she gets annoyed every time she sees your face on her computer desktop because I put a background of you on my computer. xp

Kakashi: neutral Okay.

Me: xd Okay. On with the story! It continues where I left off.

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The young silver-haired Shinobi heard a thump to his left. He looked toward the sound and his eyes widened in shock. Then tension and strain on already on his mind increased. "O-Obito...? You're supposed to be dead! Your face! It's back to normal!"

A boy several years older than Kakashi walked out of the dark corner of the room, grinning eerily. His face was ghostly pale, and he had jet black spiky hair and goggles over his eyes. "Hello, Kakashi. Long time no see." He looked down at the dead body of Sakumo Hatake. "I see that your father died," he said with a shake of his head. His tone was one of someone commenting about the weather.

Kakashi nodded, repressing the overwhelming feeling of grief, and swallowed with some difficulty. He stayed silent for a moment and then gazed up at his supposedly dead teammate. "Obito... How- How can you be alive?"

The dark-haired boy grinned. "I'm not. You see my face? Look at what you did to me, Kakashi." He reached up and began peeling off the skin on one side of his face, revealing rotting flesh and an empty eye socket. His expression suddenly turned menacing and his one other eye filled with rage. "Do you see? Do you see what you did to me? Look at me! This is what happened after I sacrificed my life to save yours!"

The seven-year-old stared in horror. He stood up and ended up stumbling backwards until he tripped over his father's body. Now the air was filled with a new repulsive stench, Obito's rotting flesh. Obito walked toward Kakashi slowly with a malignant intention in his one eye.

"Give me it back, Kakashi," Obito demanded.

The silver-haired boy tried to back away further, but he couldn't move. He was petrified with terror conquered by remorse. "G-Give what back?" he stuttered.

"You know what I want," Obito replied, pointing toward Kakashi's left eye.

Kakashi shook his head feverishly. "I don't have it. You didn't die, yet. You didn't give it to me, yet! I don't have the Sharingan, yet!"

Obito chuckled. "Oh yeah? Then what's that?" he asked, still pointing at Kakashi's left eye.

The silver-haired boy reached up and touched his left eyelid, feeling a scar run down it. Across the room was a tall mirror. Frantically, Kakashi looked into it and saw something that he hadn't expected. His left eye was crimson red with three commas rotating around the pupil. "But- But- You didn't give it to me, yet... You didn't die... You..." Kakashi clutched his head in utter confusion, the blood from his father on his hands dirtying his silver hair. "That's impossible... This isn't...." He curled up on the bloody floor, lost in his confusion.

Obito chuckled again, looming over Kakashi with a malicious grin on his face. "Well, Kakashi, I guess you do have my Sharingan. I want it back. Now." He pulled out a kunai and pointed it toward the younger boy's face, specifically the left side.

"Obito... Don't..." Kakashi rasped, his childish voice barely audible. "Gomenasai [I'm sorry]... I should have come earlier. I should have listened to you. Please..."

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Me: Whoo-hoo! Another chappie finished! ^_^ *celebrates* 3nodding

Raikira: eek

Naruto: eek

Sakura: eek

Captain Jack Sparrow: eek *sways unsteadily on his feet* Has anyone seen the rum?

Kakashi: *flips a page of his Icha Icha book, chuckling about something*

Me: eek What's wrong with everyone? *looks at Jack* I think you drank all the rum already, Jack. *points to empty bottle in his hand* By the way, you're in the wrong show. In fact, you're supposed to be in a movie. What are you doing here?

Jack: *still swaying with bleary eyes* I waz... looking for rum. Someone took it. I know it wuz ones of yaz! *points at Naruto characters accusingly*

Me: sweatdrop Oh look! There's a fountain of rum in that closet! *points at closet* Go Jack! There's your rum!

Jack: heart 4laugh I'm coming, my love! *runs into closet*

Me: *slams closet door shut and locks it* whee

Jack: *angrily* Oy! There's no rum in here!

Me: Oh... Oops. It must have been the other closet. xp

Jack: Let me out, brat! *bangs on door* scream

Me: *drops key into toilet and flushes it down* xd Oops. I accidentally dropped the key into the toilet, and I accidentally flushed it.

Jack: gonk

Me: xp

Kakashi: *still reading* Anyway, why doesn't your mother like me? I mean... I'm perfect. How can she not like me?

Sakura: sweatdrop Sensei has a big ego...

Me: stare *points to Icha Icha book in his hand* That's one reason. Another reason is that you have most of your face covered. She wonders why you cover up most of your face. She thinks you look like a woman.

Kakashi: neutral Nani?

Naruto: *looks at Kakashi closely* You aren't a woman, are you, Sensei?

Sakura: *pounds Naruto on the head* Baka! Of course, he's not a woman!

Me: xp Other reasons:

arrow I keep putting you as her desktop background.
arrow To her, you look like an idiot who doesn't know how to smile.
arrow She has to buy Naruto products, specifically Kakashi things, for me.
arrow Eh... Too many reasons. I'm too lazy to list them all. Plus, I'm trying to do a project right now. Geez, stop bothering me, people! stressed

Kakashi: sweatdrop Should I remind you that you're the one deciding to waste time writing all this in the first place?

Me: I know! whee Wheeeeeeeeeeee! I'm the Procrastinator! xp I will finish my project... and this fanfic... EVENTUALLY! xd





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Espada~del~Dios
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comment Commented on: Wed Jun 06, 2007 @ 04:15am
Hmm since im letting my Wii do an update (stupid thing says i have to in order to use the store to buy games) i checked out ur profile and low and behold, a new chapter. Geez i didnt think you could write such....descriptive story, kinda morbid and stuff, well at least its intersting (me need to watch more naurto). oh and why doesnt ur mom like kakashi? hes too cool to not like 3nodding


comment Commented on: Wed Jun 06, 2007 @ 11:29pm
Isn't Orbito dead? confused i thought he died saving kakashi's life? so did he come back from the dead????? in the manga, i though orbito was uuuggggly....but whatever i wander if he's going to come back in the manga like your story? it was be creepppy.
@daniel: i can't believe you think michelle's kakashi story is disturbing, gruesome and etc. i bet you saw things ten times worse like death note. oh wait 300! you saw 300 which is worse then michelle's story!



3mitsukiii
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