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Xbrite Report | 07/15/2008 12:18 am

random comment!!!

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Xbrite Report | 06/16/2008 6:24 pm

you are very cute.

bichonpoos Report | 03/22/2008 8:04 pm

The pale face

Turns to dust

As you lie there

Waiting.

You look so different

Its not truly you

Your cheeks

So cold

They feel

So cold

When I press mine

On yours.

Its hard to breathe

As you lie there

Breathless.

Breathless you lay

I wait for your heart

To beat again and

Again.

But the disappointment

Runs through my

Face.

I look at you

Over there.

Lying so pale

The coffin

Surrounded by

All flowers

And all your

Loved ones.

We all cry

As we watch

You lie

Some even run

Out of the room

My mom takes my

Hand

While I stand

Waiting and

Watching over you.

The day it ends

The last I see

You.

So I say my

Goodbye

And

I love you.

bichonpoos Report | 03/22/2008 8:02 pm

I scream out

But no one listens

I dice and slice

To get attention



My life goes on

And I want it to end

But the cuts and bruises

Always mend



I’m telling you now

This day is my last

I’m sorry to whomever

Picks up the shattered glass



I’m jumping now

Feel the free fall

My phone is ringing

It’s my death call

Xbrite Report | 02/21/2008 7:22 pm

I never knew you looked so pretty,

Or that you were asian.

amandabbed1964 Report | 01/21/2008 1:46 am

LadyMorganaPendragon Report | 12/27/2007 1:49 pm

I saw the picture you drew you are fantastic at drawing you are like a famuse peson i like your drwaings if you can send me one just give me a privete mesege and i will give you my email you are a famuse person i am Yessicaliz i love your drawing about lady in water.

101-Bone Fletcher-101 Report | 10/30/2007 2:15 pm

nce pro.........and damn u are really cute

olderbro13 Report | 10/15/2007 4:54 pm

nice profile

finding_purpose Report | 10/05/2007 5:24 pm

thx for the peom, its depressing yet good (^_^)/