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Remember
I'm writing a story... just out of the blue. I have another I'd rather publish, but I've lost my digital copy. So this one I will post here. For now it's called Remember. feedback would be greatfully accepted.
She was a single swan among a flock of ugly ducklings, but she didn’t see herself that way. She looked in the mirror and hated what she saw there. She thought it was her fault he couldn’t remember; she blamed herself for her pain. So she wandered around in the darkness and silence she had created inside her mind. She felt safe in her haven, though she really wasn’t safe at all. She was constantly under attack from her mind, and her broken heart. Laying there she looked so peaceful, but she was crying inside. Little did she know that he was there standing over her, with a look of deepest love in his unknowing eyes. But the love in his eyes could not reach her in the silence. If only he would call out her name, then she would hear him and fallow his voice. However, no matter how hard he tried, her name he couldn’t remember, nor anything else about her.





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